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MessageSujet: FanFiction   Lun 23 Oct - 14:21

Hey guys!
i saw that there is a topic for fanart, and you guys have posted wonderfull drawings etc. But i wondered if there was a topic for fanfiction. i couldn't find one, so i decided to start a fanfiction topic.
As you know, i'm not French, so my fanfiction will be in English. I hope u guys understand it.
well, here goes:

Title: .... (haven't thought of one yet)
Chapter 1

He clicked the switch. The lights of the dormitory flickered on.

“Ok, guys, and girls! Get ready! I expect every one of you in 15 minutes in the training room”, yelled Arch, leaving the room as quick as he had entered, not needing any response.

Looking at the alarm clock, Tia sighed.

“5AM… What the…”. She exclaimed.. On the other side of the room a loud moan could be heard.

“What has gotten into him?”, D’jok started, tilting his head lazily. “It’s 5AM for Christ sake!” Akito continue

In 10 minutes everyone was standing ‘ready’. They did have their trainings outfits on, but they looked as if they hadn’t slept for over a week. This was true, actually.
Since the Snow Kids won the Galactik Football Cup, they had been training almost every day, for the new season was beginning soon.
They had been placed in Poule 1 to compete with The Red Tigers, The Wambas and The Technoids. One of the stronger teams in the league, The Shadows, was luckily placed in Poule 2.
In two weeks they would have their first match of the new season.

But for now, the in yellow clad team, sleepily shuffled to the training room. Aarch was standing at the entrance, with his hands behind his back, his common stance.

“Where’s Ahito?” was the first thing he asked. Micro-Ice looked at him, as if he’d gone mad.
“What do you mean? He’s right behind us!”
“No, he’s not,” answered Aarch.

And as the Snow Kids turned, to see if what Aarch had said was true, they came to the conclusion he really was telling the truth.

“I’ll check the hallway,” said Thran.
“I’ll check the dormitory,” said Micro-Ice.
“And I’ll just sit here and wait for you guys to find him,” said D’jok.
Tia, Mei and Rocket were too tired to even fully register what was happening.

Thran and Micro-Ice started the search for Ahito, which didn’t take long.

“I’ve found him!” yelled Thran.
Moments later he came round the corner with Ahito leaning and half sleeping on his shoulder.

“He was lying in the middle of the hallway, sleeping”, said Micro-Ice, once they joined the others. Everyone began to laugh, which woke up Ahito.

“Hey people, I’m trying to sleep here”, he managed to pronounce, before he, once again fell in a rather deep sleep.

End of Chapter 1

i hope someone will be able to translate it into French if someone doesn't understand it....

well, i'm off to work on Chapter 2 Razz
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MessageSujet: Re: FanFiction   Mar 24 Oct - 10:33

I rewrote my first chapter, it's a bit longer now and it now has a prologue ^^
here it is:

Prologue
The Snow Kids had won the cup!

And the afterparty had been great.

Ahito, the dark-haired, always lazy, but fantastic keeper of the Snow Kids, had been sleeping almost the whole evening.

Thran, Ahito’s older brother, had been sitting next to the keeper, enjoying the view of people partying, too tired to participate.

Mei and D’jok were now seeing each other, and had been dancing, smooching and cuddling the whole evening.

Micro-Ice, the clown of the team, didn’t seem to be bothered at all, which was strange, for he still held feelings for the beautiful brunette.

Tia and Rocket had first talked things over, in private. The blonde, with brilliant green eyes seemed happier than ever, once they joined the party. Holding hands with the golden eyed, captain of the team.

Aarch held a satisfied grin on his face, while looking at his nephew and, he presumed, his girlfriend. He had known from the beginning, that there was chemistry between the two. The way they talked, laughed, shared secrets with each other, it was just meant to be, sooner or later. His nephew seemed so happy, as did Tia. Inwardly, he wished them both all the best.

Chapter 1

He clicked the switch. The lights of the dormitory flickered on.

“Ok, guys, and girls! Get ready! I expect every one of you in 15 minutes in the training room”, yelled Arch, leaving the room as quick as he had entered, not needing any response.

Looking at the alarm clock, Tia sighed, not wanting to leave the safe embrace of the teamcaptain.

“5AM… What the…”. She murmured. Next to her, Rocket opened his eyes and smiled in a comforting way.
On the other side of the room a loud moan could be heard.

“What has gotten into him?”, D’jok started, tilting his head lazily, while Mei gave him a quick peck on the cheek. “It’s 5AM for Christ sake!” Ahito continued.

In 10 minutes everyone was standing ‘ready’. They did have their trainings outfits on, but they looked as if they hadn’t slept well for over a week. This was true, actually.
Since the Snow Kids won the Galactik Football Cup, they had been training almost every day, for the new season was beginning soon. But never did they have to get up this early.
They had been placed in Poule 1 to compete with The Red Tigers, The Wambas and The Technoids. One of the stronger teams in the league, The Shadows, was luckily placed in Poule 2.
In two weeks they would have their first match of the new season.

But for now, the in yellow clad team, sleepily shuffled to the training room. Aarch was standing at the entrance, with his hands behind his back, his common stance.

“Where’s Ahito?” was the first thing he asked. Micro-Ice looked at him, as if he’d gone mad.
“What do you mean? He’s right behind us!”
“No, he’s not,” answered Aarch.

And as the Snow Kids turned, to see if what Aarch had said was true, they came to the conclusion he really was telling the truth.

“I’ll check the hallway,” said Thran.
“I’ll check the dormitory,” said Micro-Ice.
“And I’ll just sit here and wait for you guys to find him,” said D’jok.
Tia, Mei and Rocket were too tired to even fully register what was happening. Tia lazily laid her head against Rocket’s shoulder, and gave a big sigh.
“Lazy ass”, Rocket said jokingly.
“Ha! Look who’s talking,” The blonde snapped back.
“Not a morning person, are you?”
“No”
“Thought as much”
“Shut up!”
“Sure, sweetie”
Tia let out a frustrated sigh. Luckily Rocket got the hint, and didn’t continue.
D’jok, in the meantime, had almost fallen asleep in Mei’s lap.

Thran and Micro-Ice started the search for Ahito, which didn’t take long.

“I’ve found him!” yelled Thran, waking up the now sleeping D’jok.
Moments later he came round the corner with Ahito leaning and half sleeping on his shoulder.

“He was lying in the middle of the hallway, sleeping”, said Micro-Ice, “why didn’t that surprise me?” once they joined the others. Everyone began to laugh, which woke up Ahito.

“Hey people, I’m trying to sleep here”, he managed to pronounce, before he, once again fell in a rather deep sleep.


i hope u guys like it
I love you
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MessageSujet: Re: FanFiction   Mer 25 Oct - 20:51

when write you the chap 2? I want to read the rest of his fanfiction!

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MessageSujet: Re: FanFiction   Mer 25 Oct - 21:35

I busy with it ^^ hope i have it finished as soon as possible Wink
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MessageSujet: Re: FanFiction   Dim 21 Jan - 13:41

Yeah that was a nice one.I write strories about Star Wars.And I invented something for GF too.Sorry but I dont speak french too.I study german but I prefer to speak english.I may post my story.It's an interesting one.By the way can you tell a place for a lot of GF pics.Those here are cool but i'm making a collection.If you can pls tell me.
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MessageSujet: Re: FanFiction   Dim 21 Jan - 14:03

The Escape

-NO NOOOOO PLEASE LEAVE ME ALONE DOOOOON'T A strange laser like sound went through the air.The ex-technoid scientist prof.Baldwin fell on the ground

-Don't you try to do a think or we'll use our weapons-said with the well known metallic voice one technoid security robot.
Baldwin was in one of the worst Technoid prisons for already 2 months.
The bloodthursty ex-general Bleylock unfourtnately was not killed by the pirate chief.Instead he had escaped from Genesis Stadium right before the Tecnoid Robots arrived.He was more furious than ever.He knew that the metaflux was under high secutity measures in the Flux Society HQ and he wanted to get it back.For that he needed Baldwain.Bleylock had hired Sull Fett-a famous bounty hunter to get B. out of the prison.
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BIIG BIIG BIIG The prison alarm was activated

ALL ROBOTS IN SECTOR 3.EMETGENCY!!!!! INTRUDER said the prison commander on the intercom.
Soon sector 3 was crawling with robots but there was nobody else
After a minute or 2 one of the cells was detected open-BALDWIN'S CELL
The bounty hunter had managed to release him and now was flying with him with his jetpack.After a small explosition the villans were out of the prison and then they went to Fett's ship.The ship soon took off and was followed by 7 robot starfighters.The bounty hunter fired two missiles from the back turrets of the ship and they exploded with gas.The gas made a big cloud from which the robots couldnt even detect the enemy.The criminals had escaped
Soon they landed on an unknown planet which was the current hideout of Bleylock

-Baldwin,my friend,how nice of you to come round-said Bleylock and smiled smoothy as usual.-Here said he to the bounty hunter giving him 2000 credits.Fett took them and left the planet


ARCADIA NEWS ARE BROUGHT YOU BY TECHNOID
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We remind you that the price on pirate leader Sonny Blackbones's head is now a 2 000 00 standard credits.For a more beautiful Galaxy-help Technoid

We also remind you that the very dangerous criminal Bleylock is still free.
The price on his head is now 1 000 000 credits

ATTENTION: Yesterday the very dangerous criminal Bladwin had escaped from the Unadar Prison.We put a price of 100 000 credits on his head.Beware:he may be armed and very dangerous
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MessageSujet: Re: FanFiction   Mer 24 Jan - 16:02

it's nice I want the contination of your fanfic!!i think my too to write a fanfic but I don't where I begin... Razz

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MessageSujet: Re: FanFiction   Mer 24 Jan - 19:55

Actually...how do I say it-ITS A WHOLE BOOK
A big script for the second season.If there is any i'd like to see if there s something like in mine.And I want to ask yo coz i was woundering for the end

Who do you chose to DIE

1) Sonny
2)Sinedd
3)Dame Simbai
4)Brim
5)other one

They ALL can DIE.Its a special moment
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MessageSujet: Re: FanFiction   Mer 24 Jan - 21:09

Sinedd Twisted Evil Twisted Evil
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MessageSujet: Re: FanFiction   Jeu 25 Jan - 11:46

If Sinedd dies hell sacrifice himself and be a hero
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MessageSujet: Re: FanFiction   Ven 26 Jan - 22:13

NO NO NO NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I 'm the moderator so I want Sinned doesn't die!! (It's a joke!!you choose but... If Sinned can't die... Razz Laughing ) I want Dame Simbaï die because It will be a sepcial moment with Aarch.. No???

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MessageSujet: Re: FanFiction   Dim 28 Jan - 11:13

I'll just kill Bleylock lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol!
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MessageSujet: Re: FanFiction   Dim 28 Jan - 16:38

Bleylock?But who will be the miserable of the story?

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MessageSujet: Re: FanFiction   Dim 28 Jan - 20:12

Sinedd Razz Razz Razz cheers cheers
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MessageSujet: Re: FanFiction   Dim 28 Jan - 20:17

no!!not my sinedd!! Razz lol!

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MessageSujet: Re: FanFiction   Mar 30 Jan - 15:56

Bleylock's evil twin brother lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol!
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MessageSujet: Re: FanFiction   Mar 30 Jan - 19:07

It's a good idea!! I adhere! Razz lol!

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MessageSujet: Re: FanFiction   Mer 14 Mar - 15:48

well all my stories are in my language romanian,but i will try to make a new story in french or english how do you people like
off topic:i will also make a new site in english so that we can talk more and more if you all want it
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MessageSujet: Re: FanFiction   Sam 17 Mar - 10:30

Count me in. I can help for the design.
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MessageSujet: Re: FanFiction   Sam 17 Mar - 14:22

You already have to begin to create your site?

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MessageSujet: Re: FanFiction   Dim 18 Mar - 17:29

I will do it now. At least the base.

Soon I will give you the adress.

BTW Tia and Tia - you will also be admins
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MessageSujet: Re: FanFiction   Ven 30 Mar - 22:16

I indeed want to join has your project, because in this forum.... it's died! clown Razz lol!
(It is the word.) Laughing

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